【背景材料】
BG真人版suizhe“chaoyangqunzhong”、“xichengdama”yijijicengminjianjiufendiaojiejigoudechuxian,bgzhenrenbanfaxianshehuiwentidejiejuebudandankeyiyikaozhengfu,youcishehuizhiliyicizoururenmenshiye。shehuizhilishizhizhengfu、shehuizuzhi、qunzhongyifagongtongduiyushehuishiwujinxingguanlidemoshi。guoqubgzhenrenbanzaizhiliwentishiyiweiyanguanzhongfa,duiyujiejueshehuiwentizhibiaobuzhiben,yifalezhibingbunenggenbenjiejuewenti。yincizaishehuizhilizhongyeyaojiangjiufangshifangfa,liyongsixiangjiaoyu、quanshuoyindaodengliangxingshouduanjinxingfuzhu,cainengrangrenmenrentongzhilijieguo,tongshiyetishengzhilishuiping。
【习题示例】
BG真人版suizheshehuimaodundetuxian,jicengzhilichengweinanti,bgzhenrenbanguobuduantigaoshehuizhilishuiping,chuangxinshehuizhilidefangfa。qingyi“shehuizhilidegangyurou”weiti,xieyipianyilunwen。
BG真人版yaoqiu: liyimingque,neirongchongshi,jiegouwanzheng,yuyanliuchang,lianxishiji,zishuzai1000zizuoyou。
【参考范文】
gangrouxiangji tishengshehuizhilishuiping
BG真人版“minweibangben,bengubangning”。renminshiguojiadezhuti,shehuishiguojiadejishi,shehuizhiliyouweizhongyao,danmuqianwuzhengtanfannanzhilideluanxiangcengchubuqiong,guangchangwuraomindenantishenweijishou,niupixuanguanggaonanezhidejiongjingzhouerfushi,jiuqigenyuanshibufendifangzhengfuzaishehuizhilishangdefangshifangfayoudaitigao,yinci,zhiyoukexueyunyongzhilishouduandegangyurou,cainengtigaoshehuizhilishuiping。
gangxingshouduanshishehuizhilidejishuyinsu,shizhiyikaofazhiyinling,pingjiefalvyueshu,yanguanzhongfadengdegangxingfangfa;rouxingshouduanshishehuizhilideyishufenzi,shizhiyikaodiaojiequanshuo、xieshangganzhaodengderouxingfangfa。shehuizhilidegangyurou,tongchoujiangu,queyibuke。gangxingshouduanshiyoulibaozhang,ruguoqueshaogangxing,zhizhongshirouxing,huidaozhizhuduoshehuiwentifanlanwufajiezhiheyueshu。rouxingfangfashiyouliqianti,yiweiyingxingshouduan,quefarouxing,zhihuidaozhimaodunjihua,sunhairenminliyi。youcikejian,shehuizhiliyinggaigangroubingji。
gangxingshouduanshishehuizhilidefanghuoqiang,yigangzhiren。“fengfazheqiangzeguoqiang,fengfazheruozeguoruo”,fazhibgzhenrenbanduiyushehuizhilidezhongyaoxingbuyaneryu。gongxiangdancheruhuorutufazhan,tongshiluantingluanfangdexianxiangyeyuyanyulie,erxingzhengbumenmeiyoufatiaoyijushushouwuce;guangchangwubianbudajiexiaoxiang,danzaoyinraominxianxianglvjinbuzhi,juweihuiquanshuowuli;tanfanbaitanshedianfangbianminzhongshenghuodetongshi,yingxiangshirongshimaoyichengguji,wuyeguanlichengweinanti……cileishehuiguanliluanxiangjizhongnanfan,shizhizaiyuquefaqiangzhixingyueshushouduan,weiyoufatiao,cainengrangrenmenxincunjingweizhixin,weirenmenhuachuxingweidehongxianhedixian,yanguanzhongfaqidaoyueshuzuoyong。yinci,shehuizhiliyingjianchifazhibgzhenrenban,gangxingzhifa,zhangxianfazhiquanwei。
rouxingfangfashishehuizhilidezhutuiqi,yirouhuaren。guyou“yiroukegang”zheiyishuofa,“rou”bingbushiruoerwuyong,ruguonenggouyouxiaodeliyong“rou”zhiyoushi,neimekenenghuiqidaobigangxingshouduangengyouyongdexiaoguo。guixijiedaozaihuajiejuminmaodun,jinxingjiufendiaojieshijiushiyunyongrouxingmoshihuajiejiufen,bujinyouxiaodejiejuelemaodun,gengtishenglezhengfuxingxiang,tigaolegongzuoxiaolv。chucizhiwai,hangzhoushizaijinxingjiaotongzhifashi,jinxingchaoxiejiaotongfaguidechufa,shijiyeshiyirouhedefangshirangrenyueshuzijichuxingzhongdexingwei。yingxingdetiaokuanrongyirangrenchanshengnifanhedichudexinli,erruguojinxingquanshuoyindao,tixianfaneirouqing,biannengrangshehuizhilichunfenghuayu。youcikejian,roushishehuizhilizhongbibukeshaodezhichi。
“zhidaguorupengxiaoxian”bujinshiguojiafazhanzhiyao,yeshishehuizhilizhidao。gangroubingji,enweibingshi,ruanxingyindaoyuyingxingchengfaxiangjiehe,cainengtigaoshehuizhilishuiping。zhiyougoujianshehuizhilidexingeju,cainengtishengrenmindexingfugan、huodegan,cainengweishehuizengjiahexieyinsu,cainengweihuguojiaanquanyuwending,shixiancongzhanqilai、fuqilaidaoqiangqilaideweidafeiyue。
【文章点评】
BG真人版yi、liyi: tiganzhongbaohansangeguanjianci“shehuizhili”、“gang”、“rou”,keyipanduanshehuizhiliweiwenzhangzhuti,er“gangyurou”shixiezuodejiaodu,suoyiwenzhangzonglundiankeyidechu“gangrouxiangji,tishengshehuizhilishuiping”。
BG真人版er、wenzhangjiegou: benwencaiqusibianxingwenzhangxiezuojiegou。gaitimutantaoleshehuizhilideliangzhongzhilishouduan,yincikeyidechulianggefenlundian,ji“shehuizhilixuyigangzhiren”、“shehuizhilixuyirouhuaren”,weishiwenzhangjiegougengjiawanzhengyuncheng,keyizaikaitouzhihouzengjiaguoduduan,qizhongguoduduankeyichanshuneihanhuoliangzhezhijianguanxi。ji“gang”zhidaiyanguanzhongfadeyingxingshouduan、“rou”zhisixiangjiaohuaderuanxingyindao,liangzhexiangfuxiangcheng,queyibuke。
san、kaitou: benwenkaitouyinyonglemingrenmingyan,yicizengjiawenzhangliangdian,bingqieweibgzhenrenbanliejuleshenghuozhongzhilidenanti,yinqiduzhedexingqu。bingqiekaimenjianshan,zaiweijumingquezonglundian,shidekaitouluojiqingxi,cengcifenming。
si、fenlundianlunzheng: zailunzhengzhongrongrushehuijinxinglizheng,tongshiyefenxiyuanyin,chanshuyingxiang,shuangguanqixia,zuodaoyouliyouju,lunzhengchongfen,xianshibizheyanmidesiweiluoji。
wu、jiewei: jieweicaiqumingyanshijiewei,huikouwenzhangzhuti,jiqiadangyouzengtianwenzhangwencai。liyongzhengqihuayidepaibijushizengqianglewenzhangqishi,qidaoshoushuquanwen,shenghuazhutidezuoyong。
【过渡段写作参考】
gang,gaoxiaoyouli,danguogangguoyingzexiandeshehuizhiliquefarenxinghuadeguanhuai;rou,wenrouqinhe,danrouruowulizeshideshehuizhiliwufaluodaoshichu。zhiyoudangliangzhechongfendejiehe,cainengzhenzhengfahuishehuizhilidezuoyong,nenggoumanzudangqianshehuifazhandexuyao。mianduiheieshili、weifafanzuidengxingwei,zeyaocaiquyingxingshouduanyuyiyancheng;erruruoshimianduiruminzhongshengcunshenghuodexianshixuqiudeng,zekeshidangyunyongfaneirouqing。yaojieheshijiqingkuang,pinghengshehuizhilidegangyurou。
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